You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Anna Lu. I am writing

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letter to complain about the process of my recent

order

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in your bank. The

order

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number is 9999-9999. Two weeks ago, I ordered a new cheque book on your bank's website but I have not received it yet. Yesterday, I called your customer service

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to ask about my

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but it did not solve my issue properly.

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, it took me half an hour waiting in

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line which I think is not reasonable.

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, your

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on the phone was completely unfamiliar with the

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process online and she asked me to make a new

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because she could not find my

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in the system.

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, I have paid for my

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and I have got the

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confirmation sent to my email address.

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, she found my

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information but she only

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responded

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to me that the

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was in process. I would like to ask you, as a manager, how much time I will have to wait for my

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. Please reply to me at the earliest. Regarding the bad service in your customer service

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, I hope you will address these issues as soon as possible. I await your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Anna Lu

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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214 words

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