Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The
first
graph shows that there is a gradual decrease in
study
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for careers every decade.There is a gradual decrease in
students
who
study
for a
career
.
Study
for
career
is highest under
age
26
students
and the lowest over
age
49
students
. Whereas
study
for
interest
is the lowest under
age
26 and the highest over
age
49.There is a gradual increase of
students
who
study
for
interest
. Between ages 40-49
students
study
for
career
and
study
for
interest
is same. Another graph depicts the employer
support
with fees, and living expenses. There is a gradual decrease of
support
till
age
30-39
then
an increase in
support
over 49
age
.
Support
for studies for
career
and
interest
is the highest under
age
26 and the lowest between
age
group 30-39.
Study
for
career
is the same for the
age
group of 40-49 with employer
support
of around 30-40%
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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