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Some people today believe that world’s population increase is unsustainable and will eventually lead to global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is argued, that the rise in the world
population
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 has become a problem. Many people consider
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 phenomenon is leading to the deployment of a natural resource while others see it as an opportunity for the economy and
society
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 to flourish. From my personal point of view, I do agree with the statement that the over-
population
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 of the planet will create irreversible damage in the long term. Let us consider the main reason why there is an
increase
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 in the world
population
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. Ever since, science has considerably developed people have started to live longer because they don'
t
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 get ill, and
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 don'
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 die.
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, because of the rapid growth of communities in the
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 50
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 people have started to destroy the natural habitat to build houses and cities to cope with the overwhelming need to provide housing, offices and other institutions to accommodate the ageing
population
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.
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, an
increase
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 in individuals will provide fresh ideas and skills to
society
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 and
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, science.
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, the economic level will significantly
increase
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 the workforce which means an
increase
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 in the goods, materials and more comfort and development for the
society
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 in general. More professionals, scientists, technicians and workers will be available to take over for the elderly. In my opinion, I don'
t
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 really agree with the
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 statement as I have said earlier communities are growing worldwide with an older
population
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 that soon will require more attention and won'
t
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 be able to produce or contribute to the development of
society
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 or economy. To conclude, an
increase
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 in the world
population
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 will cause more damage than benefits, and
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 due to ageing ,
population
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 the economic and social development at some point will be stock and possible go in reverse.
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