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Millions of people every year move to English-spea king countries in order to get a better education. Why do many people want to learn Englis h? Should they learn English in their own country and migrate or should they learn both the languages? Support your answer with reasons.

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Communication is a two-step process of interchanging ideas in a group or with an individual. English is an international
language
 that has a very strong binding factor globally. It helps in developing international relations and provides
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society. In my opinion,
language
 should be learnt from the native country, because translation is the only mode and medium to understand the concepts. 
Moreover
, a student can study and work simultaneously, so it becomes very easy to adjust to a foreign culture. As
such
 it is advisable to have a
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understanding of the
language
. Expanding the statement, the demand for
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language
 has increased over the period, because in most
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the
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jobs,
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good command
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English
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language
 is a prerequisite. In the past, most of the
students
 migrated
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 manual jobs.
However
, nowadays, awareness is high and
students
 desire to polish their skills and work for white-collar jobs that are possible only with an understanding of a
language
. The student even feels comfortable with their regular studies when the
language
 is understandable. To recapitulate, English-speaking countries are developed nations where
students
 migrate for a better career,
therefore
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 countries should improve the quality of
language
 at the primary level so that the
students
 face reduced difficulties with the
language
 when they migrate.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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