You are the member of a sports centre and you have noticed a problem which has not been fixed for some time. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter • tell the manager about the problem • explain how this issue is affecting your experience at the gym • tell the manager what you would like to happen
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention an issue I have been having at your gym for the past four to six weeks. I really love attending your exercise classes but recently I have noticed that these are getting cancelled at the
last
minute due to low attendance.
Obviously
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,Obviously
this
is causing me great inconvenience as the classes are the only reason I come to your gym. So, when I arrive to find the class is not running, this
is a real problem for me because I need to travel thirty minutes each way to get to your centre and I could spend this
time much more productively.
I know at other centres there is an online booking system for all exercise classes and I would love to see this
type of technology at your centre. You will be able to notify customers in advance if the class were going to be cancelled and this
would save everyone's time.
Thank you for taking the time to read my concerns. I look forward to hearing your reply.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by r.keereeratsakun on
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