Write a letter of application for a course

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I would like to apply to your educational HR programme at Oxford

university

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. I saw your advert on the TV and I liked it a lot. I am

very

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a very

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communicative person who loves to talk. My opinion is that

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position would be perfect for me. I am

motivated

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and declipinated 18 years old girl, who can work with lots of people. I

have

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graduated from high school with progress

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languages

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language

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. My Spanish and English are on level B2, so I can work with people from other countries. I would be very suitable for

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programme. I am

communicative

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a communicative

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, creative and easy sociable person. I have been to lot

projects

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of projects

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with different countries.

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, my the most favourite hobby is

to travel

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. I hope to admit my application for your course.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

132 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

motivated
aspiring
dedicated
education
career objectives
enhance
expertise
innovative
contribution
achievements
credentials
perspective
enrichment
diverse
aspiration
commitment
professional development
beneficial
insightful
diligence

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Write a letter of application for a course

The Greeting

Research shows that increasing numbers of people are now living in mega-cities: cities of more than 20 million inhabitants. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people say that what children watch influences their behaviour. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their be haviour most. Discuss both vie ws and give your opinion.

More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news, while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Today family members do not eat meals together. Why does this happen? Is this a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.