Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Mrs Barret,
This
letter is in response to the advertisement you posted in the
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of India newspaper. I am Sudha Tanvar and I
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in the same town just a few blocks ahead. And I'd like to tell you that
I've
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a keen interest in doing household chores. In my home town, I use to help my mother with all the daily work
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it
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cleaning or washing dishes. Since you have a small child, I could
also
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babysitting
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baby sitting
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as I love to spend my time with them. I'm pursuing
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an English
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hons
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course from Delhi University and working with you will get me some help with money as well. There will be summer vacations and I want to utilize my time by earning some money which I can use as tuition
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. I am available from 12 to 5 on weekdays and 9 to 5 on weekends. You can contact me for any
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details, Looking for a favourable reply.
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sincerely Sudha
Tanvar
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Tanvir
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