Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Scientific
research
in Brazil, especially in health
science
, is very relevant in the
science
community. Brazilian
researchers
have fewer financial sources than other countries, but many dedicated people
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give their best in the name of
science
, even not receiving any scholarship or government incentive. Unfortunately, many
researchers
don't have any sense of ethics and manipulate the
research
to get better results or even don't describe the reality
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their methodologies. They affirm that you have to do anything in your power to write a good paper.
Additionally
, another problem is professors who teach young
researchers
to do the same thing and convince them that everyone does that too. Because of these people, many scientific articles are published being unreproducible and delaying other
research
around the world. Honesty in
research
could accelerate the cure of diseases, development of high technology and sustainable alternatives to solving environmental problems.
Besides
, small
research
groups will not have the power to complain about these people because most of
this
corruption is among the richest and biggest groups. The solution should be a better filter and blind revisions from the biggest journals of the world, in all areas of knowledge. An example would be calling a professor from the implantology to review a prosthodontic paper in view of not having interest conflict and
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they are both dentists. Another example is giving free access to scientific journals because many
researchers
don't have
this
money to invest at the beginning and
this
could amplify their field.
Nevertheless
, it is difficult to filter the bad intentions in
science
but we can do our best not to propagate mistakes. Any information will never be too much, even with good or bad results, everything is data for future ideas.
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  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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