Traditionally, elderly people have lived with and been cared for by younger family members. In modern society, more and more elderly people are living in special homes for the elderly. Why do you think families choose to have their elderly relatives live in special homes away from family? What do you think is the best way for modern families to care for their elderly relatives?

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In the past, people used to live more in the same place where they grew up.

As a result

, it was common that

sons

lived near their

parents

Instead

, nowadays, people prefer to let their

relatives

live in care

houses

This

essay will discuss the reasons why youngers choose special

houses

for their

relatives

and why trying to stay close to them is the better choice.

First

, in modern society, people tend to move more from their hometown, especially for studying and working. So, often

sons

build their families far away from their

parents

. When the distances are so high, it is very difficult to follow all their necessities:

buying

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buy

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kind of stuff for them and

escorting

Wrong verb form

escort

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them to clinic exams.

Furthermore

, society is so frenetic that even if

sons

are near they would not have time to look after them. In these cases, the only solution is to pay special

houses

for their safety and health. My own view is that living near their own

relatives

can guarantee strong relationships between

parents

and

sons

Hence

sons

have to think about the future of their

parents

before they become too old.

Moreover

, they have the duty not to relinquish them if they are not able to take care of themselves.

Nevertheless

, if the special house is the only possible choice they have to visit them for showing them frequently grandsons as well. In conclusion, staying close to their

relatives

and looking after them is not always possible in modern society. Often special

houses

are the best choice for

sons

and even for the elderly. But

sons

have to plan what to do with them in order to not to abandon them

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apply

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because everyone doesn't want to stay alone in the

last

years of our lives.

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