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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Currently, the digital revolution is coming at a fast speed. The newspaper industry is
one
 of the companies that receive huge effects from digital innovations.
Besides
, almost of
newspapers
 on the internet are free and contained in various
news
 genres. I could not agree more that the number of people who read the physical
newspapers
 will be decreased significantly. Consider in benefits of digital papers. The characteristic of online
news
 is convenience. It directly affects the decision of customers. Users can read anything from anywhere.
Therefore
, the
first
 concern is they have huge efficiencies in reading and connecting the world with your fingers.
This
 characteristic will reduce the consumption of physical
newspapers
 in the future.
Additionally
, after finishing some reading, readers must find a way to deal with a pointless staff. In the digital world, you can just leave it there or delete, it with no combustion reaction.
Conversely
, the normal
print
 needs a recycling process or trashed. Examined the bad things that ordinary
news
 can not reach. The
first
one
 is a limited topic per
one
print
. There is a lot of interesting
news
, but papers can only show limited content caused
by
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 the number of pages recited.
Secondly
, the cost per
one
print
. The budgets of
newspapers
 consist of papers, inks, transportation costs and the gross margin profit of a distributor. Those components are combined to be
one
print
 newspaper. Customers might have conflicts with a cost before purchasing it, they precisely choose the online. In conclusion, I can explain the benefits of digital
newspapers
 on more than 5 topics, but not for the ordinary
one
. Attributes of the online encourage present reading behaviour. It will consume the market share of the normal
newspapers
 in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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