You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to express my interest in a job advertisement posted in the local newspaper for a
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position at your restaurant. As I currently moved to Toronto as a qualified
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I would
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like to apply for
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position. I noticed from the job description that you are looking for a candidate with a creative way of cooking healthy food and who can communicate and manage the support staff in an effective manner. In my previous job I worked as an assistant
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at Brad's restaurant, where I have to invent different food and present it to the executive
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. I am
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personally interested in healthy living, and
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is always reflected in my cooking style. Apart from ,
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my role extended to managing the cleaning and serving staff. I found I was able to build a good working relationship with the staff in the restaurant. As I noticed that the position is
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a part-time, I will be available on Monday, Thursday and Friday afternoon and evening. I would be
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able to work on two Saturdays in a month and
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, able to extend my working hours late at night. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Please let me know if you require any
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information. Yours sincerely, Krishna Kumar C V
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Part-time job
  • Hospitality industry
  • Culinary courses
  • Customer service skills
  • Operational hours
  • Flexibility
  • Communication skills
  • Team spirit
  • Reputation
  • Cuisine
  • Eager
  • References
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