You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other.you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter •say which points in the article you agree with .explain ways in which your town center is different from most other centers •offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer or f the article

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Dear Sir, I came across an article in today's newspaper edition and I am writing to address an issue on a particular topic. It is acceptable that there is indeed an increasing number of town centres most especially Aba and Onitsha.I

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agree that some places in Anambra state lack town leaders ,but

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particular statement about centres being similar in Nigeria as a whole is false.

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,in Enugu , each town centre was beautifully designed to the taste of the indigenes and they come with larger spaces to accommodate roughly 5,000 individuals.

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, the centres in

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part of the country are built with enough chairs and tables particular for high profile executives.

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,if you ever visit Enugu, I will be glad to take you on a guided tour for proper viewing of the centre . Do well to reach me with [email protected] for more detailed enquiries. Thank you for your time. Yours faithfully, Dumebi ugwu.

Submitted by dumebiugwu1999 on Mon May 02 2022

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