In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, the issue of being an owner of a house or
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apartments
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is a really controversial
one
. In some
states
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it is believed that
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owing
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your own
home
is very significant for a
person
’s living and it is better than
to rent
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a
home
. In
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I will explain why it is better for a man to own a
home
than to rent it and do I think it is a good opinion or
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. In some
countries
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people think that having your own
property
is better than renting it.
This
belief might be caused by a serious number of reasons. The most important
one
is that a
person
who
own
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a house or a flat has a stable
life
without depending on what other people can think or do.
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, there is no need to think
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to take money for a rental
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every month or will you have a place to live after the end of the validity of the lease agreement.
Consequently
, a
person
can build more long-term
life
plans if he owns his own
home
. In my opinion,
this
belief has more perks and advantages than drawbacks, so
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it is a positive
one
. Having your own
property
allows an individual to have freedom of decisions and actions. If you have a desire to buy a pet or to change a mirror in a bedroom, you do not have to ask an owner for
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permission. So that, a
person
is not limited by what others want and think and can rule
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life
on his own. To sum up,
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opinion that it is really important for an individual to own a
property
is caused by a great number of reasons, the most important
from
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which is a stable
life
. I admit
this
belief to be a positive
one
because a
person
who has his own
property
is free to make decisions without asking
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allowance from others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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