You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir,
This
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is to bring to your kind notice that I bought a laptop from a renowned store of yours. It was purchased 3 months back. And recently I started getting some issues with it. The screen goes black when it is turned on. I searched the internet for
such
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issues and found out that many users of the same product are facing the same issue. I would
also
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like to add that it is still under warranty. (Bill No - XYZ12345) . Due to the pandemic situation, I work from home and
this
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problem is hampering my official work. I am not able to log in to do my work, and it might risk my job.
This
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type of issue is not expected from
such
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a valuable brand. As it is still under warranty, can you please send someone to get it repaired? And if it is going to take a long to repair the laptop
then
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please get it replaced as I am not in a situation to wait for long. I am hopeful that my concern will be addressed with utmost priority. Yours faithfully Suman Bagga
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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