Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, sucha as an unsatisfacotry job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Currently, even

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in a modern and suppose stable country, there are detrimental situations for a working person.

Consequently

, there is a large proportion of the population that

mantains

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maintains

that these adverse conditions,

such

as monetary difficulties or unfulfilling work, have to be accepted.

By contrast

, others think

that is

necessary to ameliorate these circumstances. In my point of view, even with the dependence

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these works, succeeding sensation overweight the necessity generally. When it comes to the necessity, some of the minted adverse

condition

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conditions

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have a big weight. There are family conditions that can not be paused or retained, reducing our possibility of searching for a better-paid

job

or our dream

job

. Due to it, people with these in

this

position tend to postpone their own desires and try to work to go through their actual unstable circumstances.

For example

, one of my friends has an unstable family position, and, because of

this

, he has to work as a waiter, even in a badly paid moment without other possible options until he has a better opportunity or family situation.

On the other hand

, mental health is an important matter for a person.

Accordingly

,

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for a more stable

job

or

increase

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our wealth

improve

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our physical and mental health.

In addition

, fulfilling jobs tend to decrease

the

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stress and generate brain stimulus.

For instance

, my father worked as an architect in a stressful construction company, with

this

, he developed heart problems and diabetes.

Although

his

next

job

was in a smaller company and had

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worst

payed

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salary, his average health

inscreased

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increased

and had a better behaviour.

Finally

, in conclusion, personal disadvantages

such

as economic and family necessities can need a

satble

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stable

and less unfulfilling

job

,

although

, generally speaking, success has to be

a

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main point to

accomplisse

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accomplish

accomplices

for a person,

decreassing

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decreasing

a lot of personal and medical dangerous condition.