Some people believe that printed books are no longer needed in this digital age, since all the records can be stored electronically. Others believe that printed books still play an important role. Dicuss both perspective and give your opinion?

According to some people in
this
modernised era , virtual
books
are much better while others believe that printed
books
also
play a vital role.
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essay will discuss both
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perspectives,
however
in my opinion printed
books
are
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better way of reading as compared to ebooks. In
this
digital world, undoubtedly e-
books
are very informative and easily available on the internet. It's very convenient to access them for everyone. They can be arranged electronically and do not require big storage space like printed
books
.
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, there was a study conducted on
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of virtual
books
as compared to printed
books
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Manchester University of the United Kingdom and in the results it was concluded that more than half of the subjects included in the study proffered to read digital
books
as compared to the hard
version
of
books
.
On the other
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books
have their own positive aspects. The kind of satisfaction an individual experiences while studying
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, can not be obtained by reading digital
books
. As well as they do not cause any
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problems
such
as eye strain, neck pain etc.Printed
books
can be easily highlighted and marked and it's
more easy
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to memorise for students while reading
this
kind of
version
as compared to
books
on
internet
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both
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version
are important and they have their individual roles in imparting knowledge and information.
However
, I believe
printed
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version
is
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better way of reading rather than
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one.
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