Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: • why you think the rent shouldn't be increased • what you will do if it is increased

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Dear Friend I desire to invite you for participating in the festival

conducting

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in my City. Thrissur Pooram is

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Temple festival in India. The History

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14th

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Century,

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, multiple groups

temples

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will involve in the Festival,

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southern group and

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every year month of November

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are lots of attractions and activities

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festival, Especially more

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hundred elephants

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in each group,

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spectacular

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experience for everyone, Musical instruments will use by artists

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can say undoubtedly it will be great

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in your life,

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traditional performances

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there

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as Leopard game

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, I will make the arrangement for

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in the temple clearly you can explore the important occasion in your life,

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you can stay

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Yours Lovingly,

Ramshad

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Rashad

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

152 words

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Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: • why you think the rent shouldn't be increased • what you will do if it is increased

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

some believe that role of the parents is more important than school when teaching their children to recycle waste to preserve the Earth’s natural resources. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many of them do not get enough exercise. What are the reasons ?

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people thimk that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important tham History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.