Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: • why you think the rent shouldn't be increased • what you will do if it is increased

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Dear Friend I desire to invite you for participating in the festival

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in my City. Thrissur Pooram is

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in your life,

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in the temple clearly you can explore the important occasion in your life,

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Yours Lovingly,

Ramshad

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Submitted by ramutty2006 on Wed May 04 2022

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

152 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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