When someone achieves greatness thanks to an innovation or other breakthrough, it is usually agreed that the individual has a high level of intelligence. Do you think that inborn thinking skills play the main role in the successful life of people? What role does ‘nurtured’ intelligence play in achievements of a successful person?

When someone achieves greatness
as a result
of
an
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innovation or other breakthrough, it is often assumed that the
person
is intelligent.
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skills
and nurture in people's successful lives. Many argue that nature owes much to a
person
's ability to achieve greatness
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because some of a
person
's thinking
skills
and level of deduction can be inherited from
parents
and using their genes and level of intelligence proves why he or she is so successful. More specifically, a
child
may develop early
skills
quickly, and
this
could be used to show that the
child
is clearly "intelligent from birth".
For example
, a
child
may inherit special thinking
skills
or interests, ideas
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a parent. Imagine that the
parents
were chemists, the
child
will be born with the ability of chemistry and if the
parents
could not achieve greatness in the field of chemistry,
then
the
child
can create new technologies and thereby prove that they can achieve what their
parents
could not achieve.
On the other hand
, a
child
's intelligence can be influenced by upbringing, a
person
can look at a
child
's education as well as how his or her
parents
raised him or her. These people would argue that the level of intelligence that enabled a
child
to be so successful is largely the result of the
child
's upbringing and the school system.
For example
, there are many schools of education, if a
child
was not smart from birth and
unable
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to create an invention for a new era,
then
teachers or other teachers can teach him thereby making him or her smart.
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conclusion, how to become great or be intellectual can be influenced by both nature and nurture.
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