You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter o Say what the participant liked about the hotel. o Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. o Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to the feedback about the meeting that was held
last
week for a full day at your hotel undoubtedly, the hotel was providing captivating view all staff members were quite happy with the view,
however
, here I would like to draw your attention to the cuisine that was served but not up to the mark according to the price charged. There is no denying the fact that the hotel was well-decorated
furthermore
, participants' feedback was satisfactory and all were quite happy owing to the lack of hustling and bustling of folk as well as less crowdy and noisy. Notwithstanding, meeting aspirants were not happy owing to the bad quality of food that was served for lunch and their taste was bitter and salty.
in addition
to
this
, the food was cold, not hot as much as it should be according to your repute.
Lastly
, I would like to make some important suggestions that may be valuable for the current or future prospects
firstly
, the chief should need to be changed and hire a professional one that makes sure the taste of the cuisine, and, the food should be served with the light burning fires on each table. I hope these suggestions would be valuable and increase customer satisfaction. Yours Faithfully, Shaban Raza
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