In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Nowadays,
people
choose to live in
the
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rental houses
instead
of purchasing one with too much money. Most
people
agree and
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with
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this
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, but others disagree. I will discuss the negative and positive aspects below. On the one hand, it is no doubt that
rent
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homes mean more flexibility and freedom for youth
,
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so that they can alter their job or move to another city anytime without any stress.
For example
,
people
will choose IKEA's
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furniture
furnitures
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instead
of high value or private-design items, which are not only easy to take away but
also
in
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low
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price.
Moreover
,
people
will have more budget to do anything their want,
such
as register
to
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a high degree course, learn interest skills or set up
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,
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because they
are not undertake
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the pressure from
house
debt which we call
house
slave.
One
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the other hand, it is commonly believed that
rent
is steadily increasing during the past few years and will continue
such
tendency in future, which will
also
become economic pressure
for
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people
. Take the
first
-tier
cities
,
for instance
.
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big
cities
, especially the
first
-tier
cities
, with lots of labour pouring in, the living cost and
rent
are sharply rising up.
Besides
, according to some
countries
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country's
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traditional culture, it is an important signal that you can buy a big
house
in big
cities
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to confirm you are living in a good condition and make money.
Furthermore
, once you buy a
house
, you have the chance to apply to kindergarten and primary school for your child in some countries. Under
such
condition
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, it is necessary to buy a home
thus
it may cause overweight economic pressure. In conclusion, there are negative and positive aspects for
rent
homes, and
people
should make
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a decision
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decision
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regarding their pursuit and current economic condition.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial commitment
  • down payment
  • initial costs
  • allocate resources
  • maintenance costs
  • mobility
  • relocate
  • market fluctuations
  • property value
  • building equity
  • appreciate in value
  • asset
  • personalization
  • restrictions
  • rental increases
  • lease renewal
  • financial instability
  • housing budgets
  • long-term security
  • landlord
  • lease agreement
  • equity
  • substantial
  • property ownership
  • property market
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