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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

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Nowadays,
people
 choose to live in
the
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rental houses
instead
 of purchasing one with too much money. Most
people
 agree and
pursuit
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with
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this
phenomeon
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phenomenon
, but others disagree. I will discuss the negative and positive aspects below. On the one hand, it is no doubt that
rent
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 homes mean more flexibility and freedom for youth
,
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 so that they can alter their job or move to another city anytime without any stress.
For example
,
people
 will choose IKEA's
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furniture
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
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instead
 of high value or private-design items, which are not only easy to take away but
also
in
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at
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low
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 price.
Moreover
,
people
 will have more budget to do anything their want,
such
 as register
to
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 a high degree course, learn interest skills or set up
company
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,
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 because they
are not undertake
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 the pressure from
house
 debt which we call
house
 slave.
One
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 the other hand, it is commonly believed that
rent
 is steadily increasing during the past few years and will continue
such
 tendency in future, which will
also
 become economic pressure
for
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people
. Take the
first
-tier
cities
,
for instance
.
The
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 big
cities
, especially the
first
-tier
cities
, with lots of labour pouring in, the living cost and
rent
 are sharply rising up.
Besides
, according to some
countries
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country's
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 traditional culture, it is an important signal that you can buy a big
house
 in big
cities
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city
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 to confirm you are living in a good condition and make money.
Furthermore
, once you buy a
house
, you have the chance to apply to kindergarten and primary school for your child in some countries. Under
such
condition
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conditions
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, it is necessary to buy a home
thus
 it may cause overweight economic pressure. In conclusion, there are negative and positive aspects for
rent
 homes, and
people
 should make
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a decision
the decision
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decision
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decisions
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 regarding their pursuit and current economic condition.
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