Nowadays,
people
choose to live in
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rental houses
instead
of purchasing one with too much money. Most
people
agree and
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this
, but others disagree. I will discuss the negative and positive aspects below.
On the one hand, it is no doubt that
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homes mean more flexibility and freedom for youth
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so that they can alter their job or move to another city anytime without any stress.
For example
,
people
will choose IKEA's
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instead
of high value or private-design items, which are not only easy to take away but
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price.
Moreover
,
people
will have more budget to do anything their want,
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as register
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because they
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the pressure from
house
debt which we call
house
slave.
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the other hand, it is commonly believed that
rent
is steadily increasing during the past few years and will continue
such
tendency in future, which will
also
become economic pressure
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people
. Take the
first
-tier
cities
,
for instance
.
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big
cities
, especially the
first
-tier
cities
, with lots of labour pouring in, the living cost and
rent
are sharply rising up.
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, according to some
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traditional culture, it is an important signal that you can buy a big
house
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to confirm you are living in a good condition and make money.
Furthermore
, once you buy a
house
, you have the chance to apply to kindergarten and primary school for your child in some countries. Under
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, it is necessary to buy a home
thus
it may cause overweight economic pressure.
In conclusion, there are negative and positive aspects for
rent
homes, and
people
should make
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regarding their pursuit and current economic condition.