Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfacotry job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about what to do if they are in
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bad or good
situations
and everyone want to be the best for all
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in
unfavorable
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situations
such
as not satisfying the job and not enough money to use. Some people said that it is best to get along with it while others claim that rather than without doing
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about it, it is more
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appropriate
to try hard and
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ways to overcome it.In my opinion, we can
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difficulties if we try our best with
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strong will.
Firstly
, the former
ones
who are accepting the bad fates have their own reasons. They think that it is annoying and disturbing already with the
situations
they are in, they don't want to get more upset and confused if they try something new and they are worse than the original
ones
.
For example
, new jobs they changed because they don't like the current
ones
might be uncomfortable with co-workers or ends up with
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salaries and loaning money from the bank because of the shortage of money and ,
consequently
, they might end up
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losing their
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collateral
such
as accommodations due to the
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rates.
Also
, they feel that they can be improved their skills or minds by resisting the bad
situations
that are given by the universe.
On the other hand
, supporters of trying to avoid bad
situations
highlight that just like the saying ' we never know unless we try'
instead
of
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afraid
raiding
the consequences of new things it is best to find out rather than living in the nightmares.
For example
, when Facebook founder, Mark
ZuckerBerg
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Zuckerberg
, developed
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media app, there is no one supporting him and others said why we need another social media when there were already many
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, but he tried his best to achieve his goal and now Facebook is the top ten largest companies in the world.
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, it is not good for
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metal
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mental
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and
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health to facing with
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situations
they don't
satisify
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satisfy
or
uncomfortable
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are uncomfortable
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.
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Unless they are held by those burdens they will not be happy or enjoy
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their lives. Overall, it can be said that both have their own opinions about bad
situations
and for me, it is best to avoid them to be good for
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and
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health.
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