Nowadays, people are spending more time away from their homes because they spend longer in their workplace. Discuss the advantage and disadvantages.

It is true that nowadays

people

are needed to work extra hours and most of their

time

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spent mostly on jobs. So,

people

are enjoying their free

time

on

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visiting outside rather than staying

home

. There are many merits and drawbacks ascribed to

this

phenomenon and

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will describe them in

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essay.

Firstly

, there are several negative effects on

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statement and one of the chief demerits is obviously costing money. We can pretty much

said

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that if we go out, our money

are

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also

out

by

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various ways

such

as transportation fees, buying meals at restaurants, and entrance fees for all kinds of entertainment.

Instead

of that, we can enjoy watching TV or playing games in our

home

without costing a dime.

Moreover

, it is not good for the ones who have family, especially children, should spend their

time

on

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playing and hanging out with

thier

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their

children rather than going out.

Therefore

, it can stronger the bonds between parents and children relationships.

Lastly

, some research

show

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that accident rates of the ones who go outside regularly are

more

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higher than the ones who stay

home

and it proves that especially in the covid-19 pandemic situations. Turning to the advantages of going outside,

people

who are single and live independently should spend definitely more

time

on

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outside

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than

home

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because if one person is spending

time

alone so much, it is not good either for his mental health or physical health.

Therefore

, by hanging out with their friends, they can refresh their minds and release

stress

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that

are

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given by

works

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. They should

also

spend their

time

on

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their parents'

home

as elders and old

people

can get easily lonely or bored.

Also

, we can visit many amusing

placements

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such

as entertainment parks to feel

excitement

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, restaurants to enjoy different tastes of food, and museums and libraries to learn something new. So what is the meaning of life if we always work and stay

in

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the

home

, we need to enjoy our life while we still can by going out and visiting new places

.

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To conclude, it can be said that

this

phenomenon has equally its own advantages and disadvantages so rather than staying on one side, we need to balance those things to enjoy

free

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the free

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time

of our life.