You are interested in applying for a new position at your company but have some questions. Write a letter to you boss. In your letter include: Which position you are considering What questions you have about it How your boss can help you decide whether or not to apply

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to raise some questions regarding a new

position

that has recently been announced by the HR department. I am wondering if I could

apply

Add the preposition

forapply

show examples

the BIM Manager

position

because I believe I could cope

the

Change preposition

with the

show examples

responsibilities of that

position

. I have been working in

this

company as a BIM Coordinator since 2015. So, I believe I am ready for the

next

step of my career development. The

first

thing I would like to know is

that

Correct word choice

what

show examples

title is intended for what department. Because if it was aimed

for

Change preposition

at

show examples

the tender department, I am sure my expertise will quickly drive

to

Correct pronoun usage

me to

show examples

fit in that job.

However

, I would be grateful if I could get

recommendation

Add an article

a recommendation

show examples

from you to attain

this

position

. I promise I would not let you down. And, I would like to get your notion about my

further

career development,

such

as whether I should apply

this

Change preposition

for this

show examples

type of

position

or not. Eagerly awaiting your reply. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win