Your friend recently moved to the same town where you live. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together. In your letter o describe why you go to this gym o say what part of this gym you recommend o explain why you think it is suitable for your friend

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Dear Joey, I am so glad to know that you have recently shifted to Brisbane, my home town. I will be happy if you join my RedEra

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at Saint John street number four. If I talk about my

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description, it is a

world class

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serious

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and has many branches in myriad nations like the USA, the UK and Brazil. Because of

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facilities like weight calculation machines and

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and

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, I like to spend more than two hours daily in these

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to burn more and more calories and to gain a good shape. In fact, I would love to suggest you

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join these

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too as there is a 30% discount on fees for these

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these days.

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, I think

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is suitable for you because it is hardly 10 minutes walking distance from your house so it will be like a

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for you. Apart from

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, the

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has a dance session every Friday and I very well know your craze about dancing so

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has almost everything you like. Can’t wait to see you in the

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. Yours lovingly, Harry

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Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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195 words

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