Your friend recently moved to the same town where you live. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together. In your letter o describe why you go to this gym o say what part of this gym you recommend o explain why you think it is suitable for your friend

Dear Joey, I am so glad to know that you have recently shifted to Brisbane, my home town. I will be happy if you join my RedEra
gym
at Saint John street number four. If I talk about my
gym
description, it is a
world class
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serious
gym
and has many branches in myriad nations like the USA, the UK and Brazil. Because of
world class
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facilities like weight calculation machines and
calisthenics
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and
jumba
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jumbo
sections
, I like to spend more than two hours daily in these
sections
to burn more and more calories and to gain a good shape. In fact, I would love to suggest you
to
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join these
sections
too as there is a 30% discount on fees for these
sections
these days.
Moreover
, I think
this
gym
is suitable for you because it is hardly 10 minutes walking distance from your house so it will be like a
warm up
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for you. Apart from
this
, the
gym
has a dance session every Friday and I very well know your craze about dancing so
this
gym
has almost everything you like. Can’t wait to see you in the
gym
. Yours lovingly, Harry
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