Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There are many ways in which
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can live together. One of them is cohabitation, and it is gaining more consideration among young
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as it allows them to know each other deeply before they decide if they want to stay together in the long run. I personally always have found
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idea very interesting, and it is a very good decision to make. In fact, I have been cohabitating with my partner for 9 years, and during
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time we have had the opportunity to learn several things. In
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I will explain my personal opinion by explicitly the 2 main reasons
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why it is a good decision and give some examples.
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with, living together allow
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to learn how to be a couple. When
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start dating it is not possible to have the full picture
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the other
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, mainly because dating is all about excitement. Once
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live together, they get to know the other
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in detail, understanding the highs and lows, as well as what the
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needs and how to have a successful relationship with them.
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we don't speak wide open about the bad mood we could have in the morning, but when you live together you don't just experience it but
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learn how to deal with it. On top of that, while you're cohabitating with
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you can grow and become stronger together with the other
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you live with.
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, by living with other
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you learn your own highs and lows and understand how to improve what's needed to improve. That doesn't mean that you become a very different
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, but that you can become a better
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. In conclusion, cohabitation is a good decision to make in my point of view, and as I have tried to explain in
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essay it can bring couples a lot of benefits, ending up with happier and stronger couples.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compatibility
  • habits
  • preferences
  • conflict-resolution
  • deal-breakers
  • financial responsibilities
  • domestic tasks
  • realistic view
  • emotional trust
  • deepening the bond
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