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Many companies and organisations require their employees to wear uniform. What kind of jobs require uniforms? What are the disadvantages of wearing uniform to work?

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In the modern era, many
people
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 who
work
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 in corporations and institutions have to wear the same
clothes
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. While
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 are some specific occupations that are required
uniforms
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, there are compelling drawbacks. On the one hand, workers have to wear
uniforms
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 owing to various reasons.
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, wearing the same
clothes
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 can protect workers and maintain an aseptic working environment.
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,
people
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work
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at
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in
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 a construction area have to wear durable
clothes
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 in order to protect themselves whereas health care
people
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 have to wear
uniform
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uniforms
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 in a surgery room to prevent contamination. Some outfits represent
reputation
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the reputation
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 and responsibilities of jobs
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 as police officers and lawyers.
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, a survey conducted by the Korea Labour Foundation has revealed that almost 30% of the Korean public
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 to think that
people
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 who put on
uniforms
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 are more prestigious and trustworthy. As the example clearly illustrate, wearing
uniforms
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 plays a key factor in the prestige of
work
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.
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, wearing the same
clothes
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 has some disadvantages. At
first
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,
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work
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workers
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such
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 as
stewardess
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stewardesses
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have
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 to wear uncomfortable
uniforms
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. Not only can wearing high-heels and a skirt bring about the difficulty of
work
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, but it may
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 contribute to major physical problems
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 as spinal disorientation, thereby leading to pain in their backs.
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, when some occupations
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 as artists
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require creativity can be stressful when they are not allowed to wear what they want to wear.
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, recent media in Korea reports that almost 15% of artists who wear
uniforms
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 feel dissatisfaction since they are not able to express their individuality.
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, wearing
uniforms
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 is not the best option since it hinders comfort and creativity. In conclusion, while some professions have to wear
uniforms
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 due to reputation and security, it
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 has downsides as some
uniforms
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 disturb expressing individuality and are not comfortable.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cohesive appearance
  • Professionalism
  • Hygiene
  • Identification
  • Authority
  • Standardized look
  • Safety
  • Individuality
  • Personal expression
  • Discomfort
  • Impractical
  • Costly
  • Maintenance
  • Job dissatisfaction
  • Autonomy
  • Freedom
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