You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter o Say what the participant liked about the hotel. o Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. o Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.

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Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you doing Good, I am the manager of "TMX" who had arranged an annual party at your grand hotel for our staff members.I am writing
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letter to communicate about our experience at your place.All the participants were thrilled to see well-trained employees at your hotel. All the attendees at the party were very happy with the experience, they had the hospitality was very good.We appreciate the decoration of the garden area with the flowers and the ambience was tremendous.The buffet was delicious all the employees were well mannered and friendly,
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the crowd was huge your staff members managed to provide us with good service.
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the good service,some of our employees are unhappy with the food that you choose to serve, As you did not provide many varieties of seafood.The participants who eat only seafood did not have many options to choose from,
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there were fewer complaints about the freshness of the dishes, Some of them are cold by the time they were served to the plate. We suggest you have newer warmer machines to keep food warm enough and
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include some more items on the menu,
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as shrimp, fish and some vegetarian dishes.I hope you will improve these by our
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visit. yours faithfully Shobha Mallela
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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