you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir,
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letter is in response to information provided in the
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from the national newspaper. The
article
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claims that the
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time calculation monument was invented in England but the information is not correct. The
first
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monument was built in India and there are proofs of that as well. It is situated in Jaipur, Rajasthan, there are huge monuments that calculate time on the basis of the sun. Both the monuments look similar in the way they are built but work completely differently. The one situated in England works on the principle of water. With
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, there is another monument located in New Delhi, India. It
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works on the same approach. If the writer of
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article
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or anyone from your team ever gets an opportunity to visit India,
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I would like to provide a guided tour of the monuments situated here. And I would
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like you to rectify the information provided in the
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. Yours Sincerely Smita Kumari
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing in response to
  • the article published in your newspaper
  • I would like to express my disagreement with
  • the claim made in the article that
  • I agree with some points raised in the article
  • However, I believe that there are significant differences in my town center
  • One notable difference is
  • Another way in which my town center stands out is
  • Furthermore,
  • In addition to
  • I would be more than happy to offer
  • a guided tour of my town
  • to the writer of the article
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