Nature has a more significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people believe that human adult intelligence is most influenced by nature than nurture. It
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that inherited characteristics affect human
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more than nurture and surroundings.
This
essay will discuss learning from others’
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and
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effect of
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environment as the main reasons.
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childhood people imitate others’ manners. In the future, people in
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situation will behave the way the person from whom they learned it behaved.
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example of an empiricist theory is Albert Bandura’s social learning theory
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was made in 1977. It is called
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doll experiment and it was concluded that aggression is learned from the environment through observation and imitation. Since learning is not what genes say, from
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example others are affecting people’s
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. On top of that, sometimes some of the characteristics can change under the influence of the environment.
This
was
also
scientifically proved by the experiment called “The Twins in Early Development Study”.
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study
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like
this
: identical twins grew up in different environments. According to the study, by observing the changes it was found
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that some genes that were
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before the study changed and
behavior
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has differed too.
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, it is obvious that every person is affected by
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nurture. Come
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an end, different studies came to the conclusion that nurture has an enormous effect on
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person’s
intelligent
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and
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way of thinking.
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