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Nowadays people around the world are choosing to self-medicate rather than seeing a doctor and using conventional medicine. What are the causes of this change and what effects can be seen as a result?

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preplan :- high cost of appointment, a need to perform many
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 effects:- relief from pain for an instance, high potency
medicines
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, harmful for a longer period liver and kidney issues Presently, a large number of
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 are inclined towards taking
medicines
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 as per their own
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 of consulting with a
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 and taking proper medical procedures.
This
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 approach has reasons
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 as high cost of
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' appointment and a need to perform many test.
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, it has adverse impact on
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 by shifting them to high potency
medicines
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 and various organ issues.
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 with,
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 nowadays try to medicate themselves because taking an appointment of a
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 is a costly affair. To clarify, when
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 have to consult a
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, they need to pay an amount for a specific time and
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 amount is same for every visit.
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, before strating a medicine course for any health issue,
doctors
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 always require report of certain
tests
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 and these
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 are like a burden on
people
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. A survey conducted by The Guardian newspaper in March, 2015 in the UK that 65% of
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 left seeing a
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 or their procedures because self-medication was a cheaper option.
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, since
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 start to take medicine without any advice of
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, they may not be able to understand the potency of
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.
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, they become habitual of high doses which harm their health situation in long run.
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, taking medicine without expert advice may be a reason of organ failure as most of the oral
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 are notsuitable for digestive organs.
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, taking pain-killers or multivitamins without
doctors
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 advice can damage liver and kidney. To conclude, though
people
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 are interested into self-medication, they can save a lot of money from
doctors
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' appointments and
tests
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;
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,
this
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 trend is not a welcoming one as it can cause many health issues and organ failure.

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