Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small and local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, with the widespread of
supermarkets
in some nations, many small local businesses are at risk of disappearing. Use synonyms
While
it is believed that the collapse of these local shops will Linking Words
cause
a significant impact on society, I indeed hold that Verb problem
have
this
type of work is the livelihood of many families, so its closure will mean the backward evolvement of many Linking Words
communities
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, a lot of developed countries completely embraced the rapid expansion of big shops and considered them as a way of showing the industry development. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
Supermarkets
are likely to have lower prices, and they are deemed more convenient. Use synonyms
For instance
, a person can find all his desired items in one Supermarket Linking Words
instead
of going around multiple small shops. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
colossal development overshadowed Linking Words
groceries
stores Fix the agreement mistake
grocery
that
many families Correct word choice
and
gain
their wagesWrong verb form
gained
from
, resulting in the rise of unemployment rates in local Change preposition
apply
communities
, which can affect Use synonyms
the
economic growth as well.
Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, Linking Words
this
new trend is a threat to many shop owners and those who are willing to start a new Linking Words
business
. Use synonyms
In other words
, Linking Words
Supermarkets
raised the standards of marketing that many young adults can't handle and are too afraid to Use synonyms
risk
and launch a company Wrong verb form
risks
that is
condemned to fail before Linking Words
its
Correct pronoun usage
it
start
. Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
This
means that local Linking Words
communities
are losing their brains and the chance to develop. Use synonyms
For example
, many youngsters are leaving their hometowns in the hope of finding better opportunities Linking Words
elsewhere
. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
new development doesn't only break the ambition of many young people to own a Linking Words
business
, but it Use synonyms
also
affects the societies' thriving.
In conclusion, the competition between Linking Words
Supermarkets
and local businesses is unfear and overwhelming to small Use synonyms
business
owners. Some people, namely me, hold that Use synonyms
this
new culture has counterproductive results on the local Linking Words
communities
, leading to increased unemployment rates Use synonyms
as well as
oppressing young adults' dreams of starting a new Linking Words
business
.Use synonyms
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