Some people believe that environmental problems are too big for individuals ro deal with, while other think that individual should take some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some
people
contend that environmental issues
are major threads which are not possible for individuals to deal with that, however
, other peoples opine that if an individual person takes responsibility to take action, they can overcome these issues
. In this
essay, I will discuss how the individual can control the environmental issues
and what are the other factors through, this
problem can be solved.
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which this
First
of all, the reason for raising the enormous environmental issues
is the negligence and unplanning of the authorities
as well as local people
. The effluent comes in the form of home wastages, drainage, and burning fuel is in fact caused by anthropogenic activities. Secondly
, this
is approximately 75% increased today's in the world due to industrialization and deforestation which is continuously underway for development the road construction, housing and so on.
There are some strategies which should government and individuals are encountered these issues
and it will help to lessen this
big problem which is going to be a major thread in future. To clean the streets, roads, shops, and markets, it is an individual's responsibility to dispose of grabbags
in the dustbin. Unfortunately, native Correct your spelling
grab bags
people
have not followed up on the authorities
rules Change noun form
authority's
authorities'
on
the safety and cleanliness of their premises and Change preposition
regarding
this
is very common in Asian countries where the notice board has clearly mentioned that Don't spit or threw the waste and the people
do not care about it. If people
become honest to themself to make the area clean and tidy, half of the environmental issues
will be tackled.
On the other hand
, Government should develop the rules and legislation and impose it strickly, if nobody follows these rules, they must have to get a fine or be charged upon breaking the laws. I believe that authorities
can implement the law or introduced the latest technologies which can control it. Other than that environmentalists can utilize the waste material and recycle it for another purpose and they are doing their best in their field. Therefore
, there is a matter of checking how people
are interested to follow the guidelines and acting accordingly
.
To recapitulate, I believe that the individual action will be a qual part in contributing to controlling the environmental issues
that have been raisin in the world. An individual should contribute their role to overcome this
problem and not fully depends on the authorities
, However
, Government and environmentalist have great concern with the environmental issues
but they also
want to support from the people
to contribute to it.Submitted by soniaku2003 on
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