Mrs barrett,an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs barrett. In your letter •suggest how you could help her in her home •say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available.

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Dear Mrs Jenner I hope you are doing well. I saw your advertisement and writing
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to inform you that
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can assist you in household activities. It has been a long
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to
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since to
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see you
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that spiritual event where we met for the
first
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time
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. You told me
then
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too, that you were looking for someone to help you. I cannot help you at that
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but
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can help
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time
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as I'll be free
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apply
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next
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summer. I will help
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with
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all the household work like cooking, washing and dishing. I can go to buy
grocery
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groceries
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too.
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Moreover
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I know
english
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so there would be no chance of misinterpretation. I would be available all
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day except in
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as
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my gym
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. You know I am very health conscious and do not like to skip a single day at
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. I hope you would find me suitable for
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opportunity. Looking forward
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your earliest reply. Yours sincerely Navdeep
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