You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter regarding an opening job position at one of your restaurants. I saw it in the opportunity column of today's newspaper. As mentioned, the vacancy is for the Yangon branch, which is nearby my house. Due to my concurrent studies, I still need to commute to the university after my working hours. So, I believe working at a walking distance job will be a good fit for both my education and career development. If you asked me, I would say I had previous work expertise related to the restaurant industry. To be more specific, I have been working in my uncle's food court for 2 years while I was attending high school. After getting a scholarship to Yangon University, I had to move there. I was wondering if you could praise me for

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job position. I am available from

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week - around 9 AM to 3 PM. I would

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appreciate it if you could arrange an online interview rather than a physical meeting as I was out of town at the moment. I believe it is a viable idea for us. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time job
Hospitality industry
Culinary courses
Customer service skills
Operational hours
Flexibility
Communication skills
Team spirit
Reputation
Cuisine
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