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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain, or America, in order to study at school, college, or university. Why do so many people want to study English? Why is English such an important international language?

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Since the dawn of the 21st century, most schools and institutions have made
English
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 education compulsory. It is said that
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 is the most widely spoken
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 understood
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 across the world.
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, most MNCs have made
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the official
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 of
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 forcing
people
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 to learn
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 failing which securing a job is
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companies in the world are seeking graduates or employees who are proficient at speaking
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 because it eases
communication
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 with clients from different
countries
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, if we take an IT professional in India, though he is working in his own country, he has to give status updates and attend regular video meetings with his client abroad and the medium of
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English
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language
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. So, to ensure that there is a smooth flow of
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 between their clients and employees, companies are looking for
people
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 who are good at
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 making it a
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 most
people
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 want to study. Getting into details, British colonization has introduced their
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English
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 to many
countries
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 and continents like Asia and
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Initially
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 when
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the British
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 went to other
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 to stretch their colonies, they introduced their
language
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 to the
people
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 of that country and to keep the
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 ongoing the officials of the host country
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started learning
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 and it rapidly became an international
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 with the vast stretch of
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 colonies. Though today most
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the
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 are rid of British governments, they got accustomed to that
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 and it has become an essential part of everyone’s life. Since trade and travel are heavily reliant on
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,
people
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 are continuing to learn the
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 and
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 it gained immense importance and popularity. In brief, the need to speak in
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workplaces
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 and with the clients and to keep trade and travel ongoing,
people
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 have embraced
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language
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 and it is continuing to reign as
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 important global
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalized education
  • Access to education
  • High-quality institutions
  • Career opportunities
  • Proficiency
  • Prerequisite
  • Cultural immersion
  • Language skills
  • Global network
  • Technological advancements
  • Scientific research
  • Academic resources
  • Comprehensive
  • Personal development
  • Independence
  • Immersion
  • Employment prospects
  • Academic exposure
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