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Some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or are interested in. To what extent do you agree.

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Nowadays,
interest
 is the major factor in
subjects
 in their school. Undoubtedly,
this
 notion remains successful in keeping the majority in its favour. The upcoming essay would shed light on my argument related to the conception and will lead to a logical conclusion. Analyzing the statement, I totally agree
to
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the wholeheartedly concur with the statement that teenagers are the most curious stage of the life in that they do not understand what is good for them and
not
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 study all
subjects
 in their school. There are myriad
of
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reasons in favour of my argument. The most prominent one is the get a survey from every student that what is their
interest
 and they should enrol in that subject. In simple words they will progress more in their
interest
 subject, apart from it, they should study all subject but not frequently once or twice in a week. To add a few more reasons, how can one forget about by the age of 18 a student should know what to choose their career. ,
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 the Universities start enrolling students at the age of 18 and they
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 their
subjects
 in the career of
interest
 eventually
this
 leads to a highly qualified job and a bright future. To encapsulate, from my side the opinion is to younger teenagers are not ready to specialize and require a broad framework of
subjects
 to help them develop, but at the age of 18,
this
 is no longer the case.
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