Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificial intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

Technology has become one of our best discoverments in the world, a lot of people argue that eventually all
jobs
will be done by artificial intelligence
robots
,
although
technology has
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big importance around the globe, I personally do not agree with
this
opinion. Nowadays scientists are creating certain kinds of bots that help with the housework.
As a result
, people believe that the same kinds of
robots
could replace their own
jobs
in the future, and
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the fast rate of development of the human race,
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giving more reason to the theory, making it easier to believe. But I extremely disagree about it, in fact, there are some
jobs
that require human skills, some that an
artifical
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artificial
intelligence wouldn’t have. People are afraid of being replaced
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their
jobs
by machines, but they don’t think
further
about the problem, it wouldn’t work with some
jobs
that require the employee to talk with the customer.
For example
, having a conversation with a customer in a
resturant
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restaurant
about describing the plate that they are about to eat, could probably engage the client to order it,
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robots
could
also
do the job
as
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a chef, but they won’t have the feeling of hospitality that a person could give. So in my personal opinion,
although
robots
could be used to do minor
jobs
like cleaning the street or making food, they won’t be able to interact with their clients,
therefore
, not all
jobs
could possibly be taken by
robots
.
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  • analytical precision
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