Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable? Could the money be better spent?
Nowadays
space
research
has become a more significant element in the current world
circumstances. Space
experimentation is more costly and funds must be involved on
more significant matters. I am in accord with the Change preposition
in
first
perspective that in the modern world
space
research
is unavoidable and there are notable advantages. This
essay would further
expand my thoughts on the same in the ensuing paragraphs.
Firstly
, modern world
space
research
is a more Salient subject. Because,
logically it is directly associated with human activities and planet rotations. In fact, there are numerous relations with Remove the comma
apply
space
research
. For Example
, weather forecasting is one of the favorable
advantages. Through Change the spelling
favourable
this
, we can predict unusual climate change Such
as storms and earthquakes.
In addition
, the world
is moving just like digitally therefore
, satellite communication is a more significant part hence
without space
research
it is unable to implement. For Instance
last
year in India there was a hurricane affected
Especially, In south Add a hyphen
hurricane-affected
india
but we receive Change the capitalization
India
the
alert from government authorities Correct article usage
an
consequently
everyone took precaution
whereas Fix the agreement mistake
precautions
eliminate
maximum disaster.
Change the verb form
eliminating
Next
, the whole world
all military organizations have been looking the space
research
is eagerly
because there Replace the adverb
eager
are
multiple relations Change the verb form
is
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between defense
defense
and security Change the spelling
defence
segment
. Fix the agreement mistake
segments
Space
research
is unavoidable in terms of defense
organizations due to Change the spelling
defence
space
researches
Change the noun form
research
countries
can identify opponent countries
military facilities and their geographical structureChange noun form
countries'
country's
Add the comma(s)
, as a result,
as a result
we can make the blueprint accordingly
.
To Conclude, as per my notion space
research
is a dominant part of all countries
. By way of space
research
we can assume the Weather forecast. Through Add a comma
,research
space
research
satellite communication has gained lots of remarkable achievements. Part of Add a comma
,research
space
research
Government authorities make
sure of rival Change the verb form
makes
countries
movements. I believe that spending the money Change noun form
countries'
country's
for
Change preposition
on
space
research
exhibits multiple advantages and benefits.Submitted by ramutty2006 on
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