Some people hold that we should spend a large amount of time and money on the protection of wild animals. Some people argue that they should be spent on human populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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budget on wild

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or human populations never fails to attract public

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. Some people believe that

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should spend on wild

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, while others are convinced

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opposite view. As far as I am concerned, I tend to advocate the former opinion, and

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essay will discuss the same. To commence with, there are a lot of solid reasons to accounting why we should put in large money for wild

animals

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First

of all, all living things are interconnected, if any part is threatened or become extinct,

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has a knock-on effect on the entire ecosystem, sending shock waves

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the environment.

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us destroyed bushfire in Australia in

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years ago, which global warming alarm single for Human

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. What is more, we often say “biodiversity”, which refers to

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of species in an ecosystem, if there are fewer animal species, a disease that affects any species spread faster and more effectively.

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animals

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responsibility in the world. Moving in to consider the argument critics, they

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spent more finance

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people populations, especially under the pandemic situations, many people are struggling with unemployment

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or face

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issue. Well, it seems to be reasonable on the surface, but they ignore wild

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have been with us dawn of time, reflection

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we are

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planet of pandemic happened is essential for

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. To sum

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taking into account all

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, we safely drew

of

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conclude

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that

protect

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wild animal

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is

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protect

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ourselves

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wellbeing

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. To address

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issue, the government and society should make a

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effort to find solutions.