People today can use the internet to learn about lives and cultrues in other countries,so it not nessary to travel anymore. Do you agree?

People today can use the

internet

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to learn about lives and cultures in other countries,so it is not necessary to

travel

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anymore. Do you agree? I

don’t

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agree. In the 2100s, many young men have their phones or computer, which means they can watch videos on the

internet

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. Many videos will introduce a

country

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or a nice

place

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, that many people think they can visit a

place

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on the

internet

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. They

don’t

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need to

travel

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. I

don’t

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agree

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it.

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travel

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can give you

sight

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, hearing, smell, etc. It will make you remember many details, but in a video, it just can give you

sight

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, and hearing, so you may well forget it. ,

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it can not make you feel excited, maybe you

don’t

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feel anything,

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, you can not share your emotion with your parents, friends etc. Because it is just a video, nothing else.

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, when I was young, I had been to Singapore. During the

travel

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, I got ill, and my mother took care of me.Now, I can not remember what

sight

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in Singapore, but, I can remember that I got ill and my mother took care of me. Now, you can see that

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I have been to Singapore, I still can not remember the

sight

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of the

country

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. It means if you only use the

internet

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to learn about lives and cultures in other countries, you may well forget it. If haft the people just watch the video to know what the

sight

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of a

place

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, what happened in a

place

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, that tourist

country

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will lose any money, and the citizens which live in the

country

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, most of them will lose jobs,

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is a big problem for those who work less,

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, it will influence many careers,

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as aerospace.

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, maybe on

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you will meet new friends, it can train your pronunciation, you

also

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can meet any changes. So, in my opinion,

travel

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is the most important in our daily life, it can improve your speech and your pronunciation. It

also

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can let a

country

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get morn money.

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