Write a letter to the council in your town suggesting ways to make the town more accessible

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing in connection with the need

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improvement

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the improvement

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of disabled

access

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in our town. I would want to make suggestions that will help to solve

this

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problem.

Firstly

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, there are not enough facilities for the disabled on public transport.

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, I suggest that we should add

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wheelchair

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wheel chair

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wheelchair

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access

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to both stations and vehicles. By doing

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people

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with mobility issues will feel more

comfortably

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while

traveling

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travelling

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Secondly

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, a lot of the buildings in the city are not accessible

for

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all

people

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, there will be an improvement if we install ramps and lifts.

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, there should be toilets for the disabled.

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result

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people

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with disabilities will feel equal to

the

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apply

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others and they will not have difficulties

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using public places.

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Lastly

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it would be a good idea to create a special disability forum. In order

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people

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will be able to find a lot of useful information there. The more everyone asks and answers the more facts it will have.

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way

people

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will be well informed about disabled

access

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throughout our city. I feel that if we improve facilities on public transport, increase

access

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to public

building

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and set up a forum to regularly discuss issues,

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will be

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able to enjoy everything in our town. Yours faithfully, Max Campion

taniadim74

May 7, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

221 words

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