Write a letter to the council in your town suggesting ways to make the town more accessible

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing in connection with the need

of

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for

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improvement

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the improvement

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of disabled

access

in our town. I would want to make suggestions that will help to solve

this

problem.

Firstly

, there are not enough facilities for the disabled on public transport.

For instance

, I suggest that we should add

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wheelchair

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wheel chair

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wheelchair

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access

to both stations and vehicles. By doing

this

,

people

with mobility issues will feel more

comfortably

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while

traveling

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travelling

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.

Secondly

, a lot of the buildings in the city are not accessible

for

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to

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all

people

.

For example

, there will be an improvement if we install ramps and lifts.

Moreover

, there should be toilets for the disabled.

As a

result

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people

with disabilities will feel equal to

the

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apply

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others and they will not have difficulties

while

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apply

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using public places.

Lastly

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it would be a good idea to create a special disability forum. In order

words

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people

will be able to find a lot of useful information there. The more everyone asks and answers the more facts it will have.

This

way

people

will be well informed about disabled

access

throughout our city. I feel that if we improve facilities on public transport, increase

access

to public

building

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buildings

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and set up a forum to regularly discuss issues,

people

will be

finally

able to enjoy everything in our town. Yours faithfully, Max Campion