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Language teachers should concentrate on giving feedback to students when they do good work, rather than on criticising bad work.

#language #teachers #feedback #students #work
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In my home country of Brazil, teaching fashions have changed over the decades and today many
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 teachers stress rewarding good work with positive feedback more than criticizing mistakes.
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, giving
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students
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 criticism may still be important, but it should be done in a constructive way. On the one hand, receiving praise for good work helps encourage
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, which is essential because learning a
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 is often challenging for
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.
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 is not just a benefit for individuals but it will
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 motivate the whole class to work harder and participate more. As we know,
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 is very important for
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 learning
in particular
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 because
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the student
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student
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 must communicate and if they are not talking they cannot learn.
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, in my
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 there was a better relationship in some classes and all of the
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 learnt more with that teacher.
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,
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students
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 will keep on making the same mistakes if they are not told about it. Some of these mistakes are basic grammar and the
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 can correct them if they recognize that they have
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 error;
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, they don't use a past tense to talk about a past action.
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, most of us will be criticized sometimes when we leave school and get our jobs so
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 should be prepared for
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. In conclusion, teachers should find the balance between positive feedback and constructive criticism.
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 some
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 may react better to one or the other and teachers must think about each individual.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentrate on
  • positive feedback
  • good work
  • criticising
  • bad work
  • motivate
  • boost confidence
  • discourage
  • demotivate
  • identify strengths
  • build on
  • overwhelming
  • hinder
  • progress
  • balance
  • effective teaching
  • encourage
  • take risks
  • think creatively
  • fear of failure
  • hesitation
  • positive learning environment
  • demoralize
  • negative atmosphere
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