Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than earn a lots of money. Others disagree and think that good salary leads to better life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is no doubt huge income offers beneficial for the family. While some certain individuals think that
satisfaction
at the
job
is more crucial than running behind
money
. Others claim that
handsome
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salary
is important to live
in
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a comfortable lifestyle
in
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all over the world. In my opinion,
however
, I believe that in most cases
this
depends on the situation of the
person
whether he has
family
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to feed or look after only himself as a single
person
. Some people who state that high payable work or profession is necessary in order to have a good life and they might
be think
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that because the majority people live in a joint family and most cases whole family depends on one
person
that mother, father or an adult elder family member of their family.
For instance
, in most Asian countries the leader is the father and he has to take care of his unemployed wife and all children. Some of the family
has
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around three to five children. Not only has that but
also
needed some
money
to look after his parents, as well as his brought family members
such
as siblings, uncle and aunt.
This
will clearly
indicates
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the importance of
huge
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a huge
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salary
will always
fulfill
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fulfil
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for
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their different type of individual needs.
In other
words
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more
money
need
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needs
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to gain better and healthy life for all the family members. And
also
huge income will give more chances to save
money
in the bank or to buy properties for their future.
For
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illustrates
this
, children need proper higher education and suitable marriage
who
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wish all parents.
On the other hand
, those who tell that enjoy at their
job
at
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all the time is more valuable than
big
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a big
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salary
and he would
be continue
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his
job
with
satisfaction
and it will lead to get more creativity and more productivity and gain success in the company or the office,
however
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If someone is not happy with his career automatically effect for him emotionally and physically.
Hence
he has
chance
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a chance
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to get some health problems
such
as
diabetic
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, high blood pressure or cardiac disease.
Therefore
, it
is consider
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to think
for
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about
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human's
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job
satisfaction
in their
job
. In conclusion,
nevertheless
,
who
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those who
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earn
huge
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a huge
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amount of
salary
would
fulfill
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fulfil
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needs
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the needs
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the
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person
and his whole family members and
also
job
satisfaction
make
very
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a very
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important role in the life and to consider it in to account.
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