In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the long run, it might be chances of all mode of transportation is automatic.
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more benefits in comparison to drawbacks which will draw your attention in upcoming paragraphs. One downside of self-driving cars is that they would lead to large employment losses. Nowadays, in many countries, a huge number of people are doing their work by driving a taxi and buses, truck drivers for delivery of curriers or
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people from one mode to another place. Imagine if driverless transport replaced
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in their life and the unemployment ratio will be increased significantly. For an instance, if somehow any system or connectivity glitch
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lives in danger.
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can take it in a positive way and learn new skills to get a job in
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automation sector. On the positive side, driverless cars can help businesses reduce their operating expenses.
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is because, with these cars, they would not need to hire drivers to deliver their products or services to their customers anymore.
For example
, the Amazon logistic company currently has thousands of truck drivers and pays them an average of 60,000 dollars per year, which adds up to billions of dollars annually. Replacing them with driverless
vehicles
would mean that huge salary payments can be eliminated.
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means it would create a major advantage for companies to save their payments on
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and it could be used for innovating and improving
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automation project. In conclusion, self-driving
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losses, I believe
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that these
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to save their operating costs. Apart from that, by upgrading their knowledge, they have a chance to work in the automation industry and there will be no chance to lose their employment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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