In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the long run, it might be chances of all mode of transportation is automatic.
However
, only commuters will travel inside these motor vehicles
. In my opinion, robotic transport have
more benefits in comparison to drawbacks which will draw your attention in upcoming paragraphs.
One downside of self-driving cars is that they would lead to large employment losses. Nowadays, in many countries, a huge number of people are doing their work by driving a taxi and buses, truck drivers for delivery of curriers or Change the verb form
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how they all are survive
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However
, this
can be avoided if operator
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On the positive side, driverless cars can help businesses reduce their operating expenses. Add an article
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is because, with these cars, they would not need to hire drivers to deliver their products or services to their customers anymore. For example
, the Amazon logistic company currently has thousands of truck drivers and pays them an average of 60,000 dollars per year, which adds up to billions of dollars annually. Replacing them with driverless vehicles
would mean that huge salary payments can be eliminated. This
means it would create a major advantage for companies to save their payments on labor
and it could be used for innovating and improving Change the spelling
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automation project.
In conclusion, self-driving vehicles
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losses, I believe Change the noun form
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downside is outweighed to upside
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help business
to save their operating costs. Apart from that, by upgrading their knowledge, they have a chance to work in the automation industry and there will be no chance to lose their employment.Fix the agreement mistake
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite