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An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious.” Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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Time plays a significant role in
individual’s
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 life. In
recent
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a recent
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discussion
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discussions
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 of time, a controversial issue has been whether the
people
 should work for now or they should make plans
about
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for
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future
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the future
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. On the one hand, some
argues
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 that the upcoming period plays an essential role. From
this
 perspective, it makes
the
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 secure lifespan.
On the other hand
,
however
, others argue that
people
 should focus on the current
day
. While I agree with an American actor that the
next
day
 is significant and essential, I cannot accept
there
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their
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overall
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over all
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 conclusion that
present
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the present
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 is unimportant because it reduces tensions and makes the person happy.
To begin
,
future
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the future
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 plays a vital role because it secures the lifespan. To put
in
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it
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 another way,
people
 should think about
future
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the future
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 as it helps them to combat
the
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their
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 upcoming worries and makes
the
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life easier. As an example, parents do jobs to earn money so that they live
in
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an easy lifestyle in elder age.
In addition
 to
this
, they save some part of the income for their children’s education and other expenses.
Therefore
, it is important for
people
 to observe the upcoming circumstances of their life.
Furthermore
,
people
 should live in
present
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the present
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 moment. It would make
the
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 healthier lifestyle. These days,
people
 are depressed and worried because of their
future
 but nobody is assured if they would be living in that period or not. Individuals should learn lessons from the current days.
In addition
 to
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 it would bring peace and harmony
in
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the
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society.
Therefore
,
people
 should be thankful
of
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for
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 the present
day
, and they should enjoy each moment of the current period. In the conclusion, both present and
future
 moments are important.
People
 should enjoy the present
day
 along with the needs of
future
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the future
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. It would improve the lifestyle of
people
 by making them less worried and
therefore
 it would bring peace i
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