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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which do you think is the better educational system?

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 of education, a controversial issue has been whether the pupils should study limited
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. To put it simply, it would help the
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 of certain courses that would improve their efficiency.
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, studying certain courses would help them in building better careers in future.
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, institutes should focus on extra curriculum activities along with the academic studies because it would help in
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 the hinder talent among the
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, it would refresh their mind and would help in reducing stress.
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. As an illustration, learning mathematics would help in calculating basic numbers in buying the products.
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, learning
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 career if they might lose interest
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 the burden and they would have enough time in building their careers.
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