You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visit you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Mr Collins, I am writing to complain about some issues with the community
pool
.Overall, I have been deeply pleased with the swimming
pool
choice. It is convenient for my job, and I love that it is located in a quiet area.
However
, I have recently been dissatisfied with the condition of the swimming
pool
. The
first
thing I would like to draw your attention to is that the
pool
has been in
such
an irritating condition, which means it has currently been filthy and littered with trash and dead bugs.I consider
this
to be a serious health hazard. To make matters worse, some people have
also
violated the rules of the
pool
to maintain its cleanliness as expected.
For instance
,
last
week,I noticed a guy that spat in the water which I found utterly disgusting.I would like to have a safe and clean
pool
to enjoy. I am kindly asking that you address these matters promptly. Yours sincerely,
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