Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

It has been argued that in the past

families

were closer to each other in comparison whit these days. There are several reasons

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problem and various measures can be taken by family members to improve the situation.

To begin

with, nowadays lacking

of

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enough

time

to spend with

others

and

also

being less

tolarent

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tolerant

towards

others

are major causes of weakening the ties between

families

. In today's modern world, it is evident that both men and women work and educate in universities. Due to

this

reason , they can not find enough

time

to spend with

others

.

Besides

in the past,

people

could establish a

raport

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rapport

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with other

families

much easier than now because they were more tolerant . Indeed,

people

are mostly used to

set

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narrow

criterias

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criteria

for their friendships.

Consecuently

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Consequently

, it can somehow

seprate

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separate

them from

others

. To

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address

this

problem

families

can consider specific

time

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times

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for family

gathering

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gatherings

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on a daily basis. Apart from occupation and busy world,

usually

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people

have free

time

thet

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they

that

can spend it on their desired activities, one of these could be communicating with

others

.

For

instance

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they can invite other

families

to their house and have a blast with each other.

besides

, another effective way to make

families

closer is to make family members more

tolarent

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tolerant

.

Meaning

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that

people

by starting to accept

other's

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others'

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opinions, convictions and

point

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points

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of

veiws

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views

view

can

develope

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develop

a stronger bond between themselves. By way of

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they can communicate with

peoole

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people

with different cultures and backgrounds to stop believing that these differences can be an obstacle for a closer connection. In conclusion, I argue that the issue of decreasing the deep relationships between

families

could be the lacking of adequate

time

to spend with

others

accompanied by

difficulty

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the difficulty

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of

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accepting other's

perception

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perceptions

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on

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different aspects of life which

it

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can be solved if

families

put certain

time

for interacting with

others

and stop being biased towards their own believes to have an intimate relationship with other

families

.