The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
line
chart demonstrates how ownership of electrical appliances has changed percentage-wise, while
the other line
graph
illustrates how many hours are spent on housework on a weekly basis both in one particular country and during the course of almost a century from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the first line
graph
displays sharp upward trends in the use of electrical appliances during the period with a fluctuation in the middle of the period for the washing machines. However
, the second
line
graph
depicts a plunge at the beginning of the span followed by a modest decline.
As it
is evident in the first Correct pronoun usage
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line
graph
, the percentage of the
people using refrigerators and vacuum cleaners surged during the era from 0 per cent for refrigerators to 100 per cent in 1980 and plateaued for the following 40 years until 2019. Correct article usage
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Additionally
, the
vacuum cleaners were used in 1920 at about 30% and soared to 100% in 2000, remaining the same amount for the final 20 years. Correct article usage
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Whereas
, the usage of washing machines was higher than both refrigerators and vacuum cleaners in the 1920s (40%) and kept going up but not as sharp as the other two up to 70% in 1960. However
, it fell gradually to almost 10% thereafter
continued increasing accounting for a little over 70% which was about 30% lower than the other two appliances.
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and thereafter
In contrast
, in the other line
chart, people did household chores about 50 hours a week at the beginning of the era, plummeting to 20 per cent in 1960 but afterwards, the trend started decreasing slightly and almost levelled out at approximately 10% in 2019.Submitted by TUTOO on
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