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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment shoud parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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It is thought by some, that
punishment
 is necessary for
children
 to learn, what behaviour is correct. I completely disagree with
this
 statement.
Although
 physical
punishment
 is the fastest way to achieve obedience, it can cause
psycological
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psychological
 problems and prevent building a relationship in the future. Adults should choose
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 in order to make
children
 behave well. If a person gets physical
punishment
 regularly in their childhood, they are more likely to have depression in older
ages
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.
For instance
, a child can have constant fear and anxiety, waiting to be punished again.
As a result
,
children
 can avoid their parents and friends, which can lead to isolation and even a hard depression. Another problem that can be caused by strict discipline is
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 to communicate with new people.
In particular
, people who were punished a lot have problems with sharing their feeling with others.
Therefore
, it is a complex task for them to contact honestly with strangers and build
family
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. Some people believe, that without physical impact parents and teachers will spend hours and hours explaining
difference
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the difference
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 between right and wrong over and over again.
However
, though
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 is not a fast process,
children
 will learn the right things much more reliably, than by fear
from
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punishment
. It is important for
children
 to understand moral principles by themselves, to be able to make complex decisions during their lives and to teach their
children
 in the future. The only
punishment
 that can be allowed is words and explanations, and it should be repeated as often as necessary for each individual child. In conclusion, despite the fact that
punishment
 is the simplest way to impact the child, parents and teachers should prefer
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intellectual
intelectual
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 way to explain, why being a good person
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in
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 important in life.
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